Period 3: Sylvia Plath

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Questions to consider:
  1. What metaphors does Plath employ?
  2. What is your reaction to Plath's reference to the Holocaust?
  3. Based on this poem, how does Slyvia Plath deal with the death of her father and her troubled relationship with her husband?
  4. How does the use of rhythm, rhyme, alliteration, and assonance contribute to the poem's meaning?


Daddy
You do not do, you do not do
Any more, black shoe
In which I have lived like a foot
For thirty years, poor and white,
Barely daring to breathe or Achoo.

Daddy, I have had to kill you.
You died before I had time ----
Marble-heavy, a bag full of God,
Ghastly statue with one gray toe
Big as a Frisco seal

And a head in the freakish Atlantic
Where it pours bean green over blue
In the waters off the beautiful Nauset.
I used to pray to recover you.
Ach, du.

In the German tongue, in the Polish town
Scraped flat by the roller
Of wars, wars, wars.
But the name of the town is common.
My Polack friend

Says there are a dozen or two.
So I never could tell where you
Put your foot, your root,
I never could talk to you.
The tongue stuck in my jaw.

It stuck in a barb wire snare.
Ich, ich, ich, ich,
I could hardly speak.
I thought every German was you.
And the language obscene

An engine, an engine,
Chuffing me off like a Jew.
A Jew to Dachau, Auschwitz, Belsen.
I began to talk like a Jew.
I think I may well be a Jew.

The snows of the Tyrol, the clear beer of Vienna
Are not very pure or true.
With my gypsy ancestress and my weird luck
And my Taroc pack and my Taroc pack
I may be a bit of a Jew.

I have always been scared of you,
With your Luftwaffe, your gobbledygoo.
And your neat mustache
And your Aryan eye, bright blue.
Panzer-man, panzer-man, O You ----

Not God but a swastika
So black no sky could squeak through.
Every woman adores a Fascist,
The boot in the face, the brute
Brute heart of a brute like you.

You stand at the blackboard, daddy,
In the picture I have of you,
A cleft in your chin instead of your foot
But no less a devil for that, no not
Any less the black man who

Bit my pretty red heart in two.
I was ten when they buried you.
At twenty I tried to die
And get back, back, back to you.
I thought even the bones would do.

But they pulled me out of the sack,
And they stuck me together with glue.
And then I knew what to do.
I made a model of you,
A man in black with a Meinkampf look

And a love of the rack and the screw.
And I said I do, I do.
So daddy, I'm finally through.
The black telephone's off at the root,
The voices just can't worm through.

If I've killed one man, I've killed two ----
The vampire who said he was you
And drank my blood for a year,
Seven years, if you want to know.
Daddy, you can lie back now.

There's a stake in your fat black heart
And the villagersnever liked you.
They are dancing and stamping on you.
They always knew it was you.
Daddy, daddy, you bastard, I'm through.

10 comments:

  1. It seem to me as though she is upset about her daddy dieing and has lived as a prisoner of her mourning(use of the holocaust). She is then faced with the issue that her relationship with her husband is not good.(at this point she feels all the men in her life are crappy). Towards the end she just gives up and decide she just have to lived her life. The author uses "But no less a devil for that" as a methaphor in her poem to show evil. The use of rhythm, rhyme, alliteration, and assonance ,makes the poem more serious and meaningful.

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  2. This poem "Daddy" was a very nice poem. It had a lot of personification for example "Bit my pretty red heart in two." I believe what the author was talking about in this sentence was how her father hurt her emotionally. Also, she used a metaphor to compare her father as a vampire. I believe she compared her father as a vampire because he sucked her life dry of the happiness that she could have of had . She could’ve had a loving father that cared for her, but instead she has a grudge for this man who she can't stand. She seems to have much hate for him, what I gathered because of his death. In this poem she also use simile to compare herself to a foot. ~Cynthia Roberts

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  3. cynthia roberts
    i believe all men are the same "if a man is not hated by someone his is not a man"
    -lashawn johnson-

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  4. I agree. In this selection, the theme of World War II is a very pertinent factor. The mentioning of the German Air Force (Luftwaffe) would indicate a very big struggle because of the atrocities committed in that particular war. I was impressed because of the reference to Adolf Hitler's book Mein Kampf. Not a lot of people know that the means My Struggle in German, and that reference shows that this selection has a lot of pain in it. When you include the mentions of Jews, Auschwitz, Panzers, and the Holocaust in one fell swoop, it would tell how much emotion is in this selection. I know that the metaphors and similes were meant to be malicious and it played its proper role famously. How someone cam have so much madness, such anger, and still make a masterpiece, is awesome.

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  5. Lashawn, I completely agree with you about her being upset because of her father passing. Also, I agree with you about her comparing her life as being a prisoner using the holocaust to describe to the reader all the pain she has went through. I personally believe she should have gave up a long time ago, and try to move on with her life. By her trying to move on she wouldn't have anything holding her back for her for having a happy live. By her holding on to her father caused her a great deal of pain and stress. Much of her time has been wasted from her life by her having sorrow for her father. ~Cynthia Roberts

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  6. Lashawn, and ur right about "If a man is not hated by someone his is not a man."

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  7. The motifs that these two poems have are about love. The poets tells the girl how he feels about her and the relationship that there in. I think that the lack of punctuations put emphasis on what the poet is saying and what he feels also. It has no pauses and makes the reader feel that it is coming from their heart. He compares how they will never be torn apart and also how they were meant for each one another. I also like that the poet uses onomatopoeia.
    EX: and it's you are whatever a moon has always meant
    and whatever a sun will always sing is you
    Darnell Henson

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  8. @Lashawn: Great description (“prisoner of mourning”)! I agree that the assonance and alliteration make the poem more meaningful, but I believe it makes the poem less serious. What I mean is that Plath may be using the odd rhyme to show that she is not realistically saying that her misfortunes are comparable to the Holocaust.

    @Cynthia: Your analysis of the vampire metaphor is correct. I also believe that the hate the speaker has for her father is due to the fact that some of us feel angry when loved ones die. It is hard to accept that someone has left us, no matter how selfish that emotion may be.

    @Darnell: I’m assuming you are responding to cummings. I like the interpretation you have that the lack of punctuations make the poem seem as if the speaker is pouring himself out at his loved ones. I also think it relates to the first stanza in the second poem. People who pay attention to the syntax (way sentences are supposed to be structured) of things will never really be able to love passionately.

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  9. PS Darnell, the sun singing is personification. If we were given the actual sound the sun made, that would be onomatopoeia

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